Book Review: ‘The Invisible Girls First Time’ by Ava Sterling



Title: The Invisible Girls First Time

Published: 29th July 2015

Publisher: Red Lace Publishing

Author: Ava Sterling

Twitter: @ava_sterling


One day in class, Jenny discovers that whenever she becomes aroused, her powers are triggered, and she becomes invisible. It always seems like a burden, something she has to hide. It keeps her from having her first time.

That is, until Nick comes along. Her long-time crush, he is the ultimate dream guy–muscled, confident, and good looking. She would do almost anything to share her first with him. The only problem is, he won’t give her a second glance.

Feeling empowered from using her invisibility powers intentionally for the first time, Jenny decides that there is a creative solution to her problem. With any luck, Nick will be hers.

(This is a steamy story and only intended for adult readers over the age of eighteen)


A story about a sexually empowered woman getting what she wants and needs from her high school crush. This one was a fun paced story, I liked that it was told direct from Jenny’s POV – it was fun being in her head. It was almost like in some places that she was talking to the reader, asking our opinion on what she went through, and is going through at the moment.

So finding out that you can turn invisible while getting sexually aroused I have to say is a first for me. Was such a fun theme to have running through the story as you could see how this could get Jenny into trouble, and freak out old boyfriends.

You can clearly see that she feels like she has been missing out on something because of her ‘gift’ and when she finds out that her high school crush is back in town she wastes no time in finding a way to see him. She just gets a little closer when the lights go out. I liked how even though Nick didn’t know Jenny was in the room with him while he was having some fun with himself you could still feel the tension rising with what they were both doing – like on some level they were both aware someone was there. As Jenny doesn’t ‘get off’ like he does you can see why she would want to come back again to work through it.

Now all I’m saying is that he must have had some very strong Whiskey to be able to sleep through what Jenny does to him the next time she comes to his room. All he’s thinking is that he is having one hell of a wet dream (big smile on his face) while Jenny is hoping to check off her virginity card. I think that its interesting how once she gets more sexually excited her inhibitions seem to melt away and her body takes over what her mind might be thinking.

After having her fun with Nick you can see that she has a better outlook on what is to come, especially with her sex life. All future boyfriends will have a pretty good idea on what turns her on in the bedroom. You can imagine her saying “Now love all you need to do is make me disappear, that way you know you’re doing it right.”


Rating – 4 out of 5 stars

I am a Beta reader for the author and received this ARC for my honest review.

Leave a comment

Filed under Erotica Romance, Reading Nook Blog Posts

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s